Agriculture（趨勢相似）

開頭段

The 月日雅思line graph illustrates changes in the percentage of people working in four sectors(service, manufacturing, agriculture, and mining) during the period from 1900 to 2000.

概述段

Overall, the service industryemployed the largest proportion of the workforcethroughout the given period, and was the only sector thatexperienced a rising trendin employment.

思路要點
：

- Service Industry數(shù)值一直最高

- 只有Service Industry數(shù)值呈現(xiàn)上升趨勢

Body paragraph 1

In 1900, 45% of the surveyed population worked in the service sector. This figuregradually increased to60% in 1940 andremained unchangedfor the next 20 years, before rising noticeably to80% in 2000.Conversely, miningstarted at a relatively low level of5% andsaw a gradual decrease to2% by 1940.Aftera stable period of two decades, itcontinued to fall steadily,reachingjust 1% by the end of the period.

思路要點：

- Service
：1900年為45%→隨后逐步上升，暑假是小作集中突破小作文表達力的黃金階段